比起800字的語文作文，寫出100詞的英語作文其實并不難，但相信不少人都遇到過這種情況：英語作文寫著寫著就沒話說了。為了艱難的湊夠字?jǐn)?shù)，只好開始編詞湊句，胡亂堆砌那些背好的高級短語和句式，或是直接糊弄兩句草草結(jié)束了。
毋庸置疑，這樣寫出來的“沒有靈魂”的作文，是拿不到高分的。
那么如何才能快速高效的寫作并取得高分呢？
今天為大家分享高級教師的英文寫作秘籍，干貨滿滿，不容錯過！
首先，我們再來一起看一遍高考英語高分作文（21-25分）的評分要求：
1. 全部完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)；
2. 覆蓋所有內(nèi)容要點；
3. 應(yīng)用了較多的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯；
4. 語法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯方面有些許錯誤，但為盡力使用較復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)或較高級詞匯所致，具備較強的語言運用能力；
5. 有效地使用了語句間的連接成分，使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊；
6. 完全達到了預(yù)期的寫作目的。
以上要求可以歸納概括為內(nèi)容結(jié)構(gòu)完整、高級詞匯和語法結(jié)構(gòu)運用得當(dāng)、文段語句連接自然。
常見的連接詞匯
句式結(jié)構(gòu)
例
1. Let’s work together to make our world a better place.
讓我們一起努力把世界變得更加美好。
2. In the past 10 years,great changes have taken place in our school.
在過去的10年里，我們的學(xué)校發(fā)生了巨大的變化。
3. The job was hard,which made me so tired that I almost quit half way.
這份工作太辛苦，差點使我半途而廢。
4. There is an increasing tendency that students own their mobile phones on campus.
在校園里，學(xué)生使用手機的趨勢在增加。
5. Your early reply will be highly appreciated.
敬盼早日回復(fù)。
6. I’m looking forward to meeting you in no time.
我期待與你早日相見。
7. No matter what you do in the future, English will always be important.
不管你將來做什么，英語都是最重要的。
8. Nothing is more important than to receive education.
沒有什么比接受教育更重要的事了。
9. If you have spare time to visit my hometown, I’d be more than happy to be your guide.
如果你有空閑時間我的家鄉(xiāng)做客，我會非常樂意做你的導(dǎo)游。
10. Views on the issue in question vary from person to person.
對于該問題的看法因人而異。
11. I’m very satisfied with what we have achieved so far.
到目前為止，我對我們?nèi)〉玫某煽兒苁菨M意。
12. Early to bed and early to rise does good to your health.
早睡早起有益于健康。
13. More and more people are aware that it is important to obey the traffic rules.
越來越多的人意識到遵守交通規(guī)則的重要性。
14. With the increasingly rapid economic growth, more problems are brought to our attention.
隨著日益迅速的經(jīng)濟發(fā)展，更多的問題受到我們的關(guān)注。
15. I suggest the department concerned taking some effective measures to improve the present situation.
我建議有關(guān)部門采取一些有效措施改善現(xiàn)狀。
高考真題案例解讀
（2019全國卷I）假定你是李華，暑假在倫敦學(xué)習(xí)，得知當(dāng)?shù)孛佬g(shù)館要舉辦中國畫展。請寫一封信申請做志愿者，內(nèi)容包括：1.寫信目的：2.個人優(yōu)勢：3.能做的事情。
注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3.結(jié)束語已為你寫好。
答案
I'm Li Hua, an outgoing boy, who is studying in London. I am writing to apply to be a volunteer of your team, having heard that a Chinese Painting Exhibition will be held in this local city. I have some advantages for the job.
First of all, having lived in China for sixteen years and having learnt English since I was a child , I have a good command of English and Chinese, which is beneficial for introducing Chinese paintings. Besides, having a good knowledge of Chinese paintings because of my familiarity with Chinese painting culture, I can get foreigners and the locals to know more about it. Last but not least，through my introduction and efforts, I believe, I can strengthen the friendship between China and England. I would appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration.
龐老師為您解讀
一、詳解
二、點睛
三、思路點撥
四、參考范文
