俗話說，萬事開頭難，好的開端是成功的一半。那么現(xiàn)在問題來了，作文開頭到底怎么寫？
常見誤區(qū)
（為了說明問題，里面的舉例可能比較夸張，但是大家不要光顧著笑，也要反思下自己是不是或多或少也有這樣的問題哦~）
◆需規(guī)避雅思寫作開頭一：中式英文
典型失敗案例：
Topic 1: The happiest moment in your life
In our life, there are always some moments which make your heart flower opened angrily...
Topic 2: The population problem
The population problem is a very big problem. For example, in the city centers of Shanghai, we can always see people mountain people sea there.
Topic 3: Is there fairness in today’s business world?
I think in today’s society, there is no fairness in the business world. For example, I always chopped when I go out buy things...
Topic 4: The advantage of being a nice person
Being a niceperson have many advantage. I believe if a people always do bad things, he will get 'baoying'.
◆需規(guī)避雅思寫作開頭二：廢話連篇
典型失敗案例：
Topic 1: Should college students be allowed to get married?
This topic is very interesting. I’m very interested in talking about this topic. Because I’m also a college student and I’m not married...
修改方案：開門見山直奔主題
In my opinion,it would not be a wise decision to allow college students to get married.
Topic 2: Will modern technology, such as the Internet,ever replace the book or the writing word as the sole source of information?
Ok, this topic isa very good topic. First, let me tell you a story: I have a friend, he likes go on the internet very much. Every day, he uses internet to read news or play internet games. So we can see the internet is more and more important in our daily life.
Topic 3: The importance of environmental protection
Oh, this topic is surely very important. Isn’t it? Of course! It’s really very very important!
◆需規(guī)避雅思寫作開頭三：觀點模糊
典型失敗案例：
Topic: Should college students be allowed to get married?
I think this topicis very hard to say. Because I am still very little, only 17, and not married,so this topic is very difficult for me...
◆需規(guī)避雅思寫作開頭四：偏離主題
典型失敗案例：
Topic: It is said that nowadays one can not acquire the qualifications and quality essential to success through university education. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?
I think to success, we must have a lot of important qualities. To have these important qualities, we must learn a lot of things, for example, English, music tools,and etc. We can learn these qualities from our teachers, our friends and from books. All in all, we can learn from many places.
◆需規(guī)避雅思寫作開頭五：語法錯誤
典型失敗案例：
Topic: If children behave badly, should their parents accept responsibility and also be punished?
About this problem, my think is if children behave badly, then parents are not right.Because teach child is parent’s responsibility. So we also punish parents too besides children is also should.
◆需規(guī)避雅思寫作開頭六：過分簡單
典型失敗案例：
Topic: The importance of environmental protection
This issue issurely very important, let’s talk about it!
◆需規(guī)避雅思寫作開頭七：用詞不當(dāng)
典型失敗案例：
Topic: Should college students be allowed to get married?
I think college students should not be allowed to get married because they are very young and so we can’t take the responsibility to form a family.
◆需規(guī)避雅思寫作開頭八：意思重復(fù)
典型失敗案例：
Topic: Your opinion on DINK families
My opinion on DINK families is that DINK families is not a good thing. And it is a bad thing. It brings no benefits to our society and it is even sometimes harmful to our society.
◆需規(guī)避雅思寫作開頭九：觀點武斷
典型失敗案例：
Topic 1: The importance of confidence
In my opinion,confidence is the most important thing for a person. All the successful peoplein the world are full of confidence. While those people who don’t have confidence, they all have failed.
Topic 2: The solution to the traffic problem
I think to solve the traffic problem, very easy! For those who don’t obey the traffic rules, we should put all of them into prison. If we do that, I’m sure there will be not raffic problem any more.
◆需規(guī)避雅思寫作開頭十：中國俗語（不是說不可以用，而是因為很多烤鴨使用的時候都會不自覺的用中式英語 讓考官不知所云）
典型失敗案例：
Topic 1: Is it good to have a large family?
I think it is good to have a large family. Because we Chinese believe a sentence: 'Many sons,many lucks'...
正確說法：Happiness lies in having many children
Topic 2: Should we pretend to know everything or admitour ignorance?
We all know, our Chinese old fathers and grandfathers said: 'Know is know, don’t know is don’t know'...
Topic 3: Do you think one’s character is greatly influenced by his/her family?
Chinese old words says very good: Dragon born dragon, phoenix born phoenix, rat’s son can make hole...
Topic 4: The advantage of being a nice person
I believe one sentence: 'A good person is all life safe'. We Chinese people always say: 'Good has good pay, bad has bad pay'.
開頭到底怎么寫
（說了這么多誤區(qū)，大家是不是有一種突然不知道怎么寫開頭的感覺？沒關(guān)系，趴趴來教你~）
要素一：現(xiàn)象句
雅思寫作考題中會出現(xiàn)一個社會現(xiàn)象，考生的任務(wù)就是在自己文章的第一句話將之改寫，重述這個社會現(xiàn)象。
E.g.1
Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish.Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?
It is true that in almost every country today each household and family produces a large amount of waste every week.
套句+同義詞替換：more and more= a large amount of
E.g.2
Some people believe that children should be allowed to stay at home and play until they are six or seven years old.Others believe that it is important for young children to go to school as soon as possible.
What do you think are the advantages of attending school from a young age?
In many places today, children start primary school at around the age of six or seven.
主被動之間的轉(zhuǎn)換：should be allowed to stay at home = start their primary school.
同義詞的替換：until they are six or seven years old = at the age of six or seven.
E.g.3
In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies.Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people to do this.
It is quite common these days for young people in many countries to have a break from studying after graduating from high school.
主被動之間的轉(zhuǎn)換，以及同義替換：finish high school = graduate from high school.
所以，從上文中可以看出，一般來說，現(xiàn)象句會在最開始加上一個套句，并且加上地點和時間。
雅思大作文開頭段經(jīng)典套句：
1.It is true that......是真實的
2.I tend to agree that… 我同意…
3.It is quite common… …是常見的
4.There is no doubt that… …是毫無疑問的
5.There is no denying that… …是毫無疑問的
6.It is undeniable that… …是毫無疑問的
地點：in many places; in many countries; in many big cities; almost every country/ city/ place
時間：in recent decades/ years; today; these days; recently; nowadays
要素二：點到問題
雅思大作文考題分成兩種：report & argumentative.
對于report(題目一般會涉及到why do you think it is important to…; how do you think people can tackle this problem.)
E.g.4
In many countries schools have severe problems with student behavior.
What do you think are the cause of this?
What solutions can you suggest?
Poor student behavior seems to be increasingly widespread problem and I think that modern lifestyles are probably responsible for this.
點到了causes--直接把原因泛泛的帶領(lǐng)出來，全文的第二段再開始慢慢細(xì)致的描述。
E.g.5
Happiness is considered to be very important in life.
Why is it difficult to define?
What factors are important in achieving happiness?
Happiness is very difficult to define, because it means so many different things to different people.While some people link happiness to wealth and material success, others think it lies in emotions and loving personal relationships.Yet others think that spiritual paths, rather than either the material world or relationships with people, are the only way to true happiness.
點到了why difficult--通過引用兩組不同人的觀點，把造成這個現(xiàn)象的原因大致導(dǎo)出，與上一個例子有異曲同工之妙。
對于argumentative(do you agree or disagree? ; discuss both views and give your opinion.; is it a positive or negative development?)，這種題型基本上都問了作者的觀點，所以在開頭段落的描寫過程中沒什么特別大的區(qū)別。
E.g.6
Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on young children.
Do you agree or disagree?
I tend to agree that young children can be negatively affected by too much time spent on the computer every day.
改寫題目+主動變被動：have more negative than positive effects on = can be negatively affected by.
直接表達(dá)自己的觀點：I tend to agree that
E.g.7
Some people feel that entertainers (e.g.film stars, pop musicians or sports stars) are paid too much money.
Do you agree or disagree?
Which other types of job should be highly paid?
I agree with the view that stars in the entertainment business are usually over paid.This is true whether we are considering stars of film, sport or popular music, and it often seems that the amount of money they are able to earn in as short time cannot possibly be justified by the amount of work they do.
現(xiàn)象+觀點
E.g.8
Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
What other measures do you think might be effective?
There is no doubt that traffic and pollution from vehicles have become huge problems, both in cities and on motorways everywhere.Solving these problems is likely to need more than a simple rise in the price of petrol.
