熱點(diǎn)演練15
Directions : For this part , you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic On Working at Home. You should write at least 120 words according to the outline ( given in Chinese ) below :
1.近年來(lái)，一些公司允許員工在家辦公。
2.分析在家辦公的利弊。
3.談?wù)勀愕目捶ā?/p>
參考范文
框架搭建：由標(biāo)題和提綱所列內(nèi)容可知，本文應(yīng)為一篇對(duì)比分析類(lèi)作文，其基本的段落安排如下：第一段描述員工可以在家辦公這現(xiàn)現(xiàn)象，指出其有利有弊；第二段對(duì)比分析在家辦公的利弊；第三段談?wù)勛约簩?duì)在家辦公的看法和理由。
On Working at Home
With the widespread of telephone , computer and fax machine , it is not difficult to deal with work at home . However , as to the advantages and disadvantages of working at home , different people will give different opinions .
Those people who advacate working at home believe that it can save the commuting time from home to workplace , which can thereby increase working time . Moreover , working at home can guarantee people against the interference of the noise which is typically in offices , However , still others object to working at home . They argue that people are more likely to become sluggish if working at home . Besides , working at home might make companies unable to respond to those emergencies which need the joint efforts of all employees .
Weighing up the pros and cons , I do not support working at home . For one thing , it may cut off people's basic communication with their colleagues , which will result in the feeling of isolation . For another , it may decrease efficiency , since people always have housework to tend . Taking above-mentioned factors into consideration , I may reasonably conclude that people should not be encouraged to work at home .
