Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write A Letter Applying for a Bank Loan. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese：
1)簡單介紹個人情況
我要高分 2)說明申請助學(xué)貸款的原因、數(shù)額
3)保證會合理利用貸款并表明還款的決心
A Letter Applying for a Bank Loan
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行文思路
本題屬于情景式命題，要求寫一封申請信。根據(jù)所給提綱，本文應(yīng)包含如下內(nèi)容：簡單介紹自己的情況，表明寫信目的：申請助學(xué)貸款;說明申請助學(xué)貸款的原因、數(shù)額;保證合理利用貸款并表明還款決心，最后表示感謝。
高分范文
A Letter Applying for a Bank Loan
Sep 12th, 2008
To whom it may concern,
I am a freshman of Lianhe University, [1]majoring in Applied Physics. I am writing in the hope that I may obtain a bank loan to support my study in Applied Physics for the following four years.
My parents are both laid-off workers, so it’s [2]beyond their power to finance me through the college education. [3]To make matters worse, my mother has suddenly fallen ill and is expecting a major operation. [4]Therefore, [5]with the college tuition becoming a much heavier burden on my family, I am compelled to apply a RMB20,000 bank loan.
[6]I give you my promise that the loan would be used properly. [4]Meanwhile, I’ll [7]spare no effort to work hard both in the study and my future career in order to pay back the loan. I would be greatly obliged if my application is granted. And I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Sincerely yours,
Song Xue
【亮點點評】
[1]“主修…”，現(xiàn)在分詞作伴隨狀語。
[2]“超出…的能力范圍”。
[3]“使事情更糟糕的是”。
[4]過渡銜接詞語，使文章條理清晰、銜接緊密。
[5]“with+賓語+賓補”的獨立結(jié)構(gòu)。
[6]“我保證…”，that引導(dǎo)同位語從句。
[7]“不遺余力”。
佳句臨摩
1.佳句：To make matters worse, my mother has suddenly fallen ill and is expecting a major operation.
臨摩：令人更迷惑不解的是，很多飛機都從大海上離奇消失了。
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2.佳句：Therefore, the college tuition becoming a much heavier burden on my family, I am compelled to apply a RMB20,000 bank loan.
臨摩：由于周圍交通不便利，人們只得步行回家。
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3.佳句：Meanwhile, I’ll spare no effort to work hard both in the study and my future career in order to pay back the loan.
臨摩：全國人民都不遺余力地支持北京舉辦奧運會。
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1.To make matters more puzzled, many planes disappeared uncannily from the sky above the sea.
2.There being no convenient traffic, people are forced to walk home.
3.All Chinese people spare no efforts in supporting Beijing’s hosting of the Olympic Games
