Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Skipping Classes on College Campus. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
我要高分 1)大學(xué)里逃課現(xiàn)象時有發(fā)生
2)分析學(xué)生逃課的原因
3)如何減少逃課現(xiàn)象
Skipping Classes on College Campus
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行文思路
本題屬于提綱式文字命題。提綱第1點(diǎn)指出一種現(xiàn)象，提綱第2點(diǎn)要求分析該現(xiàn)象產(chǎn)生的原因，提綱第3點(diǎn)要求說明如何解決該問題，由此可判斷本文應(yīng)為問題解決型作文。
根據(jù)所給提綱，本文應(yīng)包含如下內(nèi)容：描述大學(xué)生逃課現(xiàn)象及主要表現(xiàn);分析大學(xué)生逃課的主要原因;說明應(yīng)該如何減少逃課現(xiàn)象。
高分范文
Skipping Classes on College Campus
In colleges and universities, the phenomenon of students skipping classes is not unusual. There are often some students who skip those classes for feeling uncomfortable or other private reasons. [1]Besides, still some students are absent in classes without any reason but for they don’t want to.
[2]There are two main reasons for college students skip classes. [1]First, [3]compared with in middle school, students have more freedom in college. [4]It depends more on one student’s consciousness [4]whether he will attend the class. So those students lacking self-discipline begin to skip classes. [1]Second, some teachers’ classes could not attract students’ interests [5]so that some students [6]would rather skip classes to study what they are interested in.
[7]For whatever reasons, skipping classes [8]does bring negative effects on students’ study. [1]Therefore, [9]it is necessary to take some effective measures to reduce this phenomenon. [1]On the one hand, the school and teachers should make students realize the negative effects of skipping classes and increase their consciousness of attending the class. [1]On the other hand, teachers have to improve their teaching quality to attract students’ interests. [10]Only in this way can the phenomenon of skipping classes be reduced as soon as possibly.
【亮點(diǎn)點(diǎn)評】
[1]過渡銜接詞語，使文章條理清晰、銜接緊密。
[2]用于引出原因。
[3]“和…相比”。
[4]it充當(dāng)形式主語，whether從句是真正的主語。
[5]so that引導(dǎo)結(jié)果狀語從句。
[6]“寧愿”。
[7]“不管什么原因”。
[8]強(qiáng)調(diào)謂語動詞。
[9]用于引出解決辦法。
[10]“only+狀語”位于句首，引起句子部分倒裝。
佳句臨摩
1.佳句：It depends more on one student’s consciousness whether he will attend the class.
臨摩：在過去，一個學(xué)生只要成績好就行，有沒有好的身體不要緊。
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2.佳句：Some teachers’ classes could not attract students’ interests so that some students would rather skip classes to study what they are interested in.
臨摩：他們的時間完全被工作占據(jù)以至于幾乎沒有時間和孩子們認(rèn)真交流。
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3.佳句：For whatever reasons, skipping classes does bring negative effects on students’ study.
臨摩：不管學(xué)習(xí)外語的原因是什么，它都能夠使一個人受益。
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【KEY】
1. In the past, it did not matter whether a student had a strong body or not, as long as he got the top marks.
2. They are fully occupied by their work so that they have little time to talk with their children seriously.
3. To acquire another language, for whatever reasons, is very useful for a person.
