專題21書面表達
考點4 敘事描寫類
（一）（2022·新疆·中考真題）
初中生活即將結(jié)束，靜坐在考場中的你，回想三年的學習和生活，一定有許多事情給你留下美好的記憶，請選擇一件你最難忘的事情寫一篇短文。
例如：1.一次難忘的旅行
2.一次難忘的比賽
3.一次難忘的志愿服務
……
要求：1.語句通順，意思連貫，內(nèi)容詳實，語法正確，書寫規(guī)范；
2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實人名、校名：
3.詞數(shù)：80-120，開頭已給出，開頭及標點符號不計入總詞數(shù)。
Looking back at these past three years, I had a lotof sweet memories…
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【答案】例文
Looking back at these past three years, Ihad a lot of sweet memories.
Last summer vacation, I decided to learnto swim. At first, I was afraid of swimming in the water. I didn’t feel good inthe water. But the coach said he would protect me. Then I started swimming, butI couldn’t swim forward at all. With the coach’s help, I knew how to move andswim with my hands and legs. A few days later, I could swim by myself. I wasvery excited and proud of myself.
What I learn from this experience is thatnothing is impossible if I put my heart into it and try to do it bravely.
【解析】
【詳解】
1.題干解讀：本文主要講述一件令你最難忘的事情，可適當增加細節(jié)。
2.寫作指導：本文以一般過去時為主，人稱以第一人稱為主。第一段已給出；第二段主要講述令你難忘的事情是什么；最后一段講述自己的感受。寫作時運用不同的句式和短語使文章層次清晰、邏輯清楚，做到無單詞拼寫和語法錯誤。
（二）（2022·甘肅武威·中考真題）
以“being lost”為主題，根據(jù)以下提示信息寫一篇80詞左右的短文。
The pictures are provided to help you think aboutthis topic.
Pay attention to the following points when you planyour composition.
●Where was Mary?
●What was Mary doing?
●What happened to her?
●What did Mary feel when seeing her mother?
The following words may help you:
●crowded with visitors
●so interested in the animals
●no one around
●turn to …
要求：
1.條理清楚，行文連貫，可適當發(fā)揮；
2.文中不能出現(xiàn)其他人名和地名等信息；
3.在答題卡的相應位置作答。
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【答案】One possibleversion:
Mary went to the zoo with her mother on alovely Sunday afternoon. The zoo was crowded with visitors. Near the gate ofthe zoo stood two pretty giraffes. Mary had never seen such amazing animalsbefore. She was so interested in the animals that she looked at every smallmovement of them carefully. After a while, she wanted to tell her mother whatshe’d found about these animals. However, she noticed there was no one around.She was afraid and worried, but she remembered that her mother told her not tomove when being lost. So she waited for her mother just at the gate of the zoo.Soon after, she saw her mother walking to the gate anxiously. When seeing hermother, Mary was happy and ran to her mother.
【解析】
【詳解】
1. 題干解讀：題目要求根據(jù)提示要點，結(jié)合圖片提示進行詳細地描述故事的發(fā)生以及過程及結(jié)果，可以適當?shù)陌l(fā)揮，寫作時要運用正確的英語表達，要選用恰當?shù)脑~匯和短語。
2. 寫作指導：寫作時要緊密結(jié)合所給出的要點內(nèi)容，本文應該用第三人稱來介紹內(nèi)容；時態(tài)采用一般過去時；在介紹內(nèi)容時，力求語言準確，內(nèi)容完整，保證行文連貫，條理清晰。
（三）（2022·湖南湘潭·中考真題）
親愛的同學，恭喜你即將畢業(yè)。在過去的三年初中學習中，你的老師教導、關心、幫助過你。請你選擇一位老師，表達你對他（她）的感激之情。
內(nèi)容包括：
1.你對這位老師的印象；
2.你感謝他（她）的原因；
3.你對他（她）的祝福。
注意：
1.詞數(shù)在80詞左右（開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）；
2.可適當舉例或拓展；
3.文中不能出現(xiàn)可能透露真實身份的任何信息（如校名，師生名字等）。
It’s time for me to say goodbye to my junior schoollife. I’m here to say thanks to_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文：
It’s time for me to say goodbye to myjunior school life. I’m here to say thanks to my English teacher Mr. Zhang. Sheis very kind and patient. She has helped me a lot in my studies since I came tothis school. When I was in trouble, she used to encourage me and give me somegood advice. At one time I failed to pass an English test and I was very sadabout it. She came and cheered me up. She told me some good ways to improve myEnglish. With her help, I have made great progress in English. I’m so thankfulto her for her kind help that I will work harder and try to do better in thefuture. I hope she will become better and better.
【解析】
【詳解】
1.題干解讀：該題目屬于記敘文寫作，本文開頭已經(jīng)給出，選擇一位你想要感謝的老師，表達感激之情，根據(jù)提示要點進行寫作，可以適當發(fā)揮。
2.寫作指導：本文主要用第一人稱和第三人稱來描述，時態(tài)以一般過去和一般現(xiàn)在時為主。本文可以采用一段式寫作，要求描述對老師的印象，感謝的原因以及對老師的祝福。寫作時保持主謂一致性，做到無語法和標點錯誤。
（四）（2022·天津·中考真題）
假如你是李華，請你給美國筆友David寫一封信，講述你班同學王紅回家路上做的一件好事，并談談感受。
（1）上周五，一棵樹被大風吹倒，擋住了道路。
（2）王紅看到后，撿起地上的樹枝，又去移動樹干。
（3）樹干太沉，她搬不動。
（4）人們過來幫忙。
（5）你認為……
參考詞匯：被吹倒be blowndown 擋住block 樹枝branch 樹干trunk
要求：
（1）詞數(shù)：80~100個。
（2）開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。
（3）要點齊全，行文連貫，可適當發(fā)揮。
DearDavid,
How are you? I’d like to share a story with you.
Last Friday,_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Do you have a story to tell? Hope to hear from you.
Yours,
LiHua
【答案】例文
Dear David,
How are you? I’d like to share a storywith you.
Last Friday, on Wang Hong’s way home, shesaw a big tree was blown down by wind and it blocked the way. After Wang Hongsaw it, she picked up the branches on the ground and then moved the trunkagain. But the trunk was so heavy that she couldn’t move it by herself. Whenother people saw what she was doing, they were moved by her and came to helpher. Finally, they succeeded in moving the trunk away.
I think she is a very kind person. Andfrom this story, I learn that we should offer to help when someone needs help.It not only helps others, but also makes ourselves happy.
Do you have a story to tell? Hope to hearfrom you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【詳解】
1.題干解讀：本文要求根據(jù)題干中的提示內(nèi)容講述你班同學王紅回家路上做的一件好事，并談談感受，可適當增加細節(jié)。
2.寫作指導：本文以一般過去時為主，人稱以第三人稱為主。第一段和最后一段已給出，第二段具體描述她做好事的過程；第三段描述自己的感受。寫作時運用不同的句式和短語使文章層次清晰、邏輯清楚，做到無單詞拼寫和語法錯誤。
（五）（2022·云南·中考真題）
ILearned How to ________
提示：人生是一個不斷學習、進步的過程。通過學習，你掌握了某種技能，明白了某些道理……請以“ILearned How to ________”為題，用英語寫一篇短文，敘述你的一次學習經(jīng)歷，并談談你的感受。
要求：
1.請先將題目補全后，再作答；
2.語言流暢、書寫規(guī)范、卷面整潔，詞數(shù)不少于60個；
3.文中不得使用真實姓名、校名，否則以零分計；
4.請將短文寫在答題卡上，寫在本試題卷上無效。
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【答案】例文
I Learned How to Learn English Well
At the beginning of middle school, Ialways got bad grades in English. I was very upset and didn’t know how to learnit well.
One day, my English teacher talked to meand understood my problem. She gave me some advice like speaking more. Fromthat day, I made an English study plan. First, I listened to English songs orwatched English movies. Second, I listened to teacher in class carefully andtook notes. Thirdly, I took part in the English corner. I communicated withothers as much as possible in English. Finally, I have great progress inEnglish.
From this experience, I know that when youface some difficulties, don’t give up easily. You should find some ways to dealwith them. You will success one day.
【解析】
【詳解】
1.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文。以“我學會了如何學好英語”為題寫一篇短文。
2.寫作指導：本文采用一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時，人稱以第一人稱和第二人稱為主。分為三段式：第一段引出主題；第二段介紹自己在學習英語的經(jīng)歷；最后一段介紹自己從這次經(jīng)歷得到了什么感悟。寫作時保持主謂一致性，做到無語法和標點錯誤。
（六）（2022·浙江寧波·中考真題）
為弘揚中華民族“勞動最光榮”的傳統(tǒng)美德，這學期你校組織了一系列勞動實踐活動 (a series of labour activities)，假如你是李華，請根據(jù)表格中的信息并結(jié)合自身經(jīng)歷，寫一篇英語短文向?qū)W校英語報投稿。
注意：
（1）短文必須包括表格中的所有要點，并適當發(fā)揮；
（2）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名和校名；
（3）詞數(shù)80-100；標題已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。
Time
Things I learned
My feelings
March
grow vegetables and plant trees
…
April
repair things like electric fans…
May
…
Let’s Enjoy Working
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【答案】例文：
Let’s enjoy working!
This term, I took part in a series oflabor activities in our school. I was happy that I learned a lot.
In March, I learned to grow vegetables andplant trees on our school farm. In April, I learned to repair things likeelectric fans and bicycles with the help of our teachers. In May, I learned todo much housework, such as making the bed, sweeping the floor and foldingclothes.
I think the labour activities are not onlyeducational but also useful. I’m sure the more life skills I have, the more independentI will be.
【解析】
【詳解】
1. 題干解讀：題目要求根據(jù)提示要點，介紹自己參加的學校組織的一系列勞動實踐活動的情況，可以適當?shù)陌l(fā)揮，寫作時要運用正確的英語表達，要選用恰當?shù)脑~匯和短語。
2. 寫作指導：寫作時要緊扣主題，本文應該用第一人稱來介紹內(nèi)容；時態(tài)采用一般過去時；在介紹內(nèi)容時，力求語言準確，內(nèi)容完整，保證行文連貫，條理清晰。
（七）（2022·重慶A卷·中考真題）
科學研究發(fā)現(xiàn)，快樂可讓我們身體更健康、思維更敏捷、心態(tài)更陽光。獨樂樂不如眾樂樂。某英語網(wǎng)站以“傳遞快樂”為主題發(fā)起故事分享活動，請講述生活中你通過傳遞快樂（直接或間接的），感染他人的小故事。
要求：
1.80-120詞；
2.文中不能出現(xiàn)自己的姓名和所在學校的名稱。
參考信息：
1.起因，經(jīng)過；
2.結(jié)果，感悟；
3.……
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【答案】例文
A study shows thathappiness can make people healthier in mind and mental. Our positive mood hasan influence on others. I want to share my experience with you.
I have a good friend andher name is Lucy. She was so short that other classmates always laughed at her.She was very upset. At that time I always told her some funny stories to cheerher up. And to become tall and strong, I also taught her to keep a healthy dietand do some exercise. Little by little, she became confident.
From this experience, I learn thathappiness is important and it can bring us a lot like a more sunny mindset.
【解析】
【詳解】
1.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文。以“傳遞快樂”為題寫一篇短文。
2.寫作指導：本文主要采用第三人稱和第一人稱，時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時為主。分為三段式：第一段引出主題；第二段講述自己傳遞快樂的經(jīng)歷；最后表達自己從這次經(jīng)歷的感悟。寫作時保持主謂一致性，做到無語法和標點錯誤。
（八）（2022·重慶B卷·中考真題）
有效控制憤怒能幫助我們恢復理智，找回方向，解決問題。你校English Coner 將進行“ControlYour Anger and Solve Your Problem”的成長分享。請你寫一篇發(fā)言稿，講述你通過有效控制憤怒，成功解決某一問題的小故事，并分享你的感悟。
要求：
1.80—120詞，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞
2.文中不能出現(xiàn)自己的姓名和所在學校的名稱。
參考詞匯：anger n.[U] 憤怒
1.有效控制憤怒，成功解決問題的小故事（起因、經(jīng)過、結(jié)果）
2.你的感悟（保持冷靜、學會反思、有效溝通……）
3.……
ControlYour Anger and Solve Your Problem
Have you ever controlled your anger and solved aproblembetter?__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thanks for listening.
【答案】例文
Control Your Anger and Solve Your Problem
Have you ever controlled your anger andsolved a problem better? Here is my experience.
Last term, I bought a magazine that I hadalways wanted. I liked it so much that I was careful every time I carried it.But one day, my best friend Tom took the magazine without telling me. When Ifound it, I was very angry. But I calmed down soon. I thought of how Tom helpedme when I was in trouble and I didn’t want to break the relationship betweenus. So I controlled my anger and decided to have a talk with him. I told himthat he should tell me if he wanted to read the magazine. After the talk, ourrelationship became stronger.
From this experience, when we are angry,we should calm ourselves down and learn to reflect. The most important is tocommunicate with others on time so that we can solve the problems better.
Thanks for listening.
【解析】
【詳解】
1.題干解讀：本文以“ControlYour Anger and Solve Your Problem”為題，結(jié)合自己的經(jīng)歷講述通過有效控制憤怒，成功解決一件小事，可適當增加細節(jié)。
2.寫作指導：本文以一般過去時和一般現(xiàn)在時為主，人稱以第一人稱和第三人稱為主。第一段引入話題；第二段講述自己有效控制憤怒，成功解決問題的小故事；第三段描述自己的感悟。寫作時運用不同的句式和短語使文章層次清晰、邏輯清楚，做到無單詞拼寫和語法錯誤。
