今天先說一下關于復議的事情。當成績比預期的明顯偏低時，我歷來都是比較鼓勵大家復議的。之前我們也有過統(tǒng)計，寫作復議成功接近四成。
今 日 考 題
今天的大作文來自于新東方中級直通車教材原題，書上有范文，在Shark寫作月計劃中的第15天，這是我們學習 cohesion 的練習材料。
Task 1: line graph（線圖）
Task 2: Over the next decade, many tasks at home or work will be done by robots. Is this a positive or negative development?
以下范文來自新東方中級直通車教材 — Mindset Level 2
In the future, experts predict that robots will be doing many of the tasks currently done by humans. Therefore, there will be many advantages and disadvantages for society. This essay will discuss the positives and negatives of this new development.
The biggest advantage robots will bring to the workplace is their ability to work quickly and accurately. This is because they do not need to take breaks or have holidays, which would mean that having a robot worker would be much more economical than employing a human. Another great advantage of using robots in the workplace is that they can perform tasks that are thought to be dangerous; for example, these intelligent machines can work on busy roads or underground. They can also do the jobs human do not want to do, such as cleaning the house or dealing with rubbish.
In contrast, there are also many disadvantages to robots entering the workplace. The most significant disadvantage is that many humans would be left unemployed. In addition, if a robot was to stop working, this could cause major problems for a company which relied heavily on the technology. A robot which was not working properly could also be very dangerous in some cases. Furthermore, the cost of maintaining these robots could be very expensive.
In conclusion, as can be seen from the points made in this essay, although there are many advantages to this, a significant negative impact would be the loss of jobs for humans. If managed in the right way, however, I feel that overall the advantages would outweigh the disadvantages.
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